Comments for Once Upon a Time in the West of London http://www.paulanderson.org.uk Scrivenings and scribblings by writer and artist Paul Anderson Wed, 15 Feb 2012 13:25:49 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 Comment on [FGC#1] Watching by Annie http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/2012/02/fgc1-watching/#comment-1253 Annie Wed, 15 Feb 2012 13:25:49 +0000 http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/?p=1438#comment-1253 I can't say how much I enjoyed seeing your words on the page again. Tantalising, creepy, forcing me to look over my own shoulder as I type as I am now sure there are eyes from the garden watching...Great pace, drawing the reader in, inch by inch, revealing the desperation and bravado of the character. oh - and congrats on making it to the first new challenge for WA.. Hope to see you here more often... I've also contributed to FGC - http://www.annieevett.blogspot.com.au/2012/02/rightful-inheritance-fgc2012-1.html I can’t say how much I enjoyed seeing your words on the page again. Tantalising, creepy, forcing me to look over my own shoulder as I type as I am now sure there are eyes from the garden watching…Great pace, drawing the reader in, inch by inch, revealing the desperation and bravado of the character.

oh – and congrats on making it to the first new challenge for WA.. Hope to see you here more often…
I’ve also contributed to FGC – http://www.annieevett.blogspot.com.au/2012/02/rightful-inheritance-fgc2012-1.html

]]> Comment on [FGC#1] Watching by Rebecca Fyfe http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/2012/02/fgc1-watching/#comment-1251 Rebecca Fyfe Tue, 14 Feb 2012 16:00:13 +0000 http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/?p=1438#comment-1251 *creepy* (darn typos and unconscious spelling!) *creepy* (darn typos and unconscious spelling!)

]]> Comment on [FGC#1] Watching by Rebecca Fyfe http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/2012/02/fgc1-watching/#comment-1250 Rebecca Fyfe Tue, 14 Feb 2012 15:58:57 +0000 http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/?p=1438#comment-1250 That was a very enjoyable read. It had a wonderfully eerie and creepie mood which I loved. :) That was a very enjoyable read. It had a wonderfully eerie and creepie mood which I loved. :)

]]> Comment on [FGC#1] Watching by FGC2012 #1 Submission | Write Anything http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/2012/02/fgc1-watching/#comment-1247 FGC2012 #1 Submission | Write Anything Mon, 13 Feb 2012 06:32:12 +0000 http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/?p=1438#comment-1247 [...] Jodi Cleghorn (@jodicleghorn)2. Laura Meyer (@L_Meyer)3. Rebecca L Dobbie4. Paul Anderson (@panderson1979)5. Paul [...] [...] Jodi Cleghorn (@jodicleghorn)2. Laura Meyer (@L_Meyer)3. Rebecca L Dobbie4. Paul Anderson (@panderson1979)5. Paul [...]

]]> Comment on [FGC#1] Watching by Storm Dweller http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/2012/02/fgc1-watching/#comment-1246 Storm Dweller Sun, 12 Feb 2012 16:09:05 +0000 http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/?p=1438#comment-1246 Poor Jack. Be careful what you wish for. Poor Jack. Be careful what you wish for.

]]> Comment on [FGC#1] Watching by Jane Harvey http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/2012/02/fgc1-watching/#comment-1244 Jane Harvey Sun, 12 Feb 2012 11:41:57 +0000 http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/?p=1438#comment-1244 Wonderful descriptive story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you. Wonderful descriptive story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you.

]]> Comment on [FGC#1] Watching by Sulthana http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/2012/02/fgc1-watching/#comment-1243 Sulthana Sun, 12 Feb 2012 10:22:11 +0000 http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/?p=1438#comment-1243 Lol. That was an enjoyable read, you built up the suspense really nicely and I felt scared and sorry for poor Jack. I also want to know what the thing is! But I suppose that's what makes the story work so well, that mystery, and fear of the unknown. Lol. That was an enjoyable read, you built up the suspense really nicely and I felt scared and sorry for poor Jack.
I also want to know what the thing is! But I suppose that’s what makes the story work so well, that mystery, and fear of the unknown.

]]> Comment on Fiction Friday – 9 January 2009 Literati & Son, Metaphysical Pawnbrokers by Farewell [fiction] Friday | Write Anything http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/2009/01/fiction-friday-9-january-2009-literati-son-metaphysical-pawnbrokers/#comment-1234 Farewell [fiction] Friday | Write Anything Fri, 03 Feb 2012 20:44:52 +0000 http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/2009/01/fiction-friday-9-january-2009-literati-son-metaphysical-pawnbrokers/#comment-1234 [...] Next week came, and I wrote a little pastiche of one of my favourite books. Of all my [Fiction] Fridays, I am fondest of this one. It is naive, but it makes me smile reading it. I can’t pick a favourite by other authors. I can’t choose just one friend, nor just one story by my friends. So instead, if I may be so bold and/or egotistical, here are three more of my own which are personal favourites of mine: Lady’s Luck, Product Recall and Literati & Son, Metaphysical Pawnbrokers. [...] [...] Next week came, and I wrote a little pastiche of one of my favourite books. Of all my [Fiction] Fridays, I am fondest of this one. It is naive, but it makes me smile reading it. I can’t pick a favourite by other authors. I can’t choose just one friend, nor just one story by my friends. So instead, if I may be so bold and/or egotistical, here are three more of my own which are personal favourites of mine: Lady’s Luck, Product Recall and Literati & Son, Metaphysical Pawnbrokers. [...]

]]> Comment on Fiction Friday – 27 March 2009 Product recall by Farewell [fiction] Friday | Write Anything http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/2009/03/fiction-friday-27-march-2009-product-recall/#comment-1233 Farewell [fiction] Friday | Write Anything Fri, 03 Feb 2012 04:12:41 +0000 http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/2009/03/fiction-friday-27-march-2009-product-recall/#comment-1233 [...] here are three more of my own which are personal favourites of mine: Lady’s Luck, Product Recall and Literati & Son, Metaphysical [...] [...] here are three more of my own which are personal favourites of mine: Lady’s Luck, Product Recall and Literati & Son, Metaphysical [...]

]]> Comment on Fiction Friday – 24 April 2009 Lady’s Luck by Farewell [fiction] Friday | Write Anything http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/2009/04/fiction-friday-24-april-2009-ladys-luck/#comment-1232 Farewell [fiction] Friday | Write Anything Fri, 03 Feb 2012 04:10:59 +0000 http://www.paulanderson.org.uk/2009/04/fiction-friday-24-april-2009-ladys-luck/#comment-1232 [...] be so bold and/or egotistical, here are three more of my own which are personal favourites of mine: Lady’s Luck, Product Recall and Literati & Son, Metaphysical [...] [...] be so bold and/or egotistical, here are three more of my own which are personal favourites of mine: Lady’s Luck, Product Recall and Literati & Son, Metaphysical [...]

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